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My Artistic Poem!

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This is for the person who said the poem in my journal wasn't artistic enough!



This poem expresses me as a person! It is my deepest, most profound piece of work that I believe I've ever some up with!

Oh and I drew the shitty pixel shit too.
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Warrior-cats-FTW
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

Very comical!

It is well designed, and the border [the roses and pink] make it funnier.
The face also adds to it.
This is just a well done poem that made me laugh in real life.
I know a lot of people reuse the old "Roses are red....." and such, but this is one is one of the betters. The font suggests that the poems goes more serious towards the final words.
It's nice how you used color for certain parts to ensure the meaning of the word. Overall a very nice poem that you have designed here. Keep up the amazing poems! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" title=":) (Smile)"/>

~Warrior