Vision: I simply LOVE the way the letter fade in at the top, but the plain hard black background and edges make it seem just a little to...hard.
Originality: A few people do these sorts of things, but your is by FAR the best I've seen. It sure beats 'Loading Loading....Loading failed. Retrying'
Technique: I like the way the loading jerks, but I think it would be better if it jerked in smaller sacraments, because it being quite so jerkey makes it a little uncomfortable to look at. Again, I love the letter fading!